These are all excellent. You are right, clearly we are on the same wavelength!
Hmm, ones I like particularly: "all the mistakes," "I hacked my brain" (dead-on perfect for Avon), and "to thine own self" which is dead on perfect for Paul Darrow, and therefore makes me grin a lot. I also really love "before and after" and I think that remixing it for Blake (the character) as you've done here gives it yet more meaning than it already had - not just the original's portrait of a never-ending journey and the way it eclipses everything, but also drawing in the issues of Blake's erased memories, and that therefore the never-ending journey is both born out of that and all there is left. And then also how he dies. So, really well done there.
Also, Creeper Travis with his Naughty Blake Pictures is THE BEST.
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Hmm, ones I like particularly: "all the mistakes," "I hacked my brain" (dead-on perfect for Avon), and "to thine own self" which is dead on perfect for Paul Darrow, and therefore makes me grin a lot. I also really love "before and after" and I think that remixing it for Blake (the character) as you've done here gives it yet more meaning than it already had - not just the original's portrait of a never-ending journey and the way it eclipses everything, but also drawing in the issues of Blake's erased memories, and that therefore the never-ending journey is both born out of that and all there is left.
And then also how he dies.So, really well done there.Also, Creeper Travis with his Naughty Blake Pictures is THE BEST.